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Not really about nature, but you knew that already.
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Warhammer89 Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2010
How very John Donne of you!

:salute:
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phosphorene Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
=D Nice twisting of the traditional subject matter. It really is 'unexpected'. :)
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TwistedAlyx Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
:giggle: That always happens to me.
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CailinLiath Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2009
[link]

the formatting isn't exactly perfect, but it's the best I can find online. properly it has a bit more grace.
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nycterent Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2009  Professional Writer
I'm not sure how to take this comment, but thank you.
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CailinLiath Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2009
It's just something to read. One of my favorites though I can't seem to be bothered to remember more than the substance of it. I may have the poem memorized before I can recall the title and author.
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nycterent Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2009  Professional Writer
Ah, I thought it might have had some sort of relation to my submission, and so was confused. Again, thank you for the link! It's a lovely poem.
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CailinLiath Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2009
only through the vague tangent of laundry, I suppose.
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nycterent Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2009  Professional Writer
Right.
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CailinLiath Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2009
dunno. it's what I thought of and I thought you might like to read it is all. I'm a bit fuzzy right now, so I may not be making any kind of sense.
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Alphemale Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2009
hahahahaiku
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LoveHealsYou725 Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2009
I really, really like this.
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LizzardFlame Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2009
very nice.
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Aadea Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2009
:) aaaah.
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the-poets-of-blah Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2009
It looks simple, but it has a hidden beauty I cannot fully perceive. It creates a very strong image.

I like it =D
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the-poets-of-blah Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2009
Btw:

I made some haiku once.
But my storage pc crashed, and I can't reach them now :shithitsthefan:
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Professor-Kirby Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2009  Hobbyist Photographer
Very simple and beautiful. I like how you use/suggest monochrome in it: grey soaked skies, pale wings, snow, laundry.

:+fav:
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