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EDIT: Okay, because I am ridiculously indecisive, I've changed this back to it's initial form and submitted my second version as a separate deviation.

Looking in the mirrors, you don't see yourself.


Well, literally, you don't. ;]

Critiques


:icontalescaper:
Very interesting structure and you managed to capture it at an angle that makes it even more interesting. I do think a few things might be improved though. Most notably the framing, which seems just a bit off-centre horizontally, which is a pity because the overall feeling is very sterile, which really works for this particular image.
A slightly different framing will probably also cut out the people we see on the right. I personally try to get as little people people in an architecture shot as possible and if you have the option of taking a different position, it might be worth it. Of course, having people in the shot also serves its purposes if that's what you want, but it's definitely something you need to take into consideration.
And last but not least: I'm really curious what this structure looks like at dusk or dawn, with more colour in the light. Might be worth a try :D
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:iconbaileojos:
really like this photo!
perfect match among strenght and beauty..

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612 - feliz y baile
:icondesertfire:
Wow!! This is very eyecatching!!! I how you captured the perspective and made one want to look!! Fantastic indeed!! :clap:

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My web manga: Zombie Masters

When I close my eyes
I am at the center of the sun
And I cannot be hurt
By anything this wicked world has done

__Conjure One: Center of the Sun
:iconralfmaximus:
Yes, it's beautiful. And a great photo.

But... what the fark *is* that?
:iconnycterent:
It's the Risdagen in Berlin. =]
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:iconphosphorene:
The perspective on this is wonderful. You must have had to lean over a railing or something to get this shot, or so I imagine.

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I awake from a daze, pacing an eternity on cold concrete and asphalt beneath a night sky stained with ice...

"A Dream of Ice"
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:iconxhastex:
really great angle on the shot....
very interesting concept...XD...

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OLYMPUS IMAGING CORP.
u40D,S500,uD500
1/80 second
F/3.1
6 mm
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Nov 30, 1999, 12:00:00 AM

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