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EDIT: Okay, because I am ridiculously indecisive, I've changed this back to it's initial form and submitted my second version as a separate deviation.
Looking in the mirrors, you don't see yourself. Well, literally, you don't. ;] Comments
Wow!! This is very eyecatching!!! I how you captured the perspective and made one want to look!! Fantastic indeed!!
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December 18, 2008
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u40D,S500,uD500 1/80 second F/3.1 6 mm 64 Nov 30, 1999, 12:00:00 AM |
Critiques
A slightly different framing will probably also cut out the people we see on the right. I personally try to get as little people people in an architecture shot as possible and if you have the option of taking a different position, it might be worth it. Of course, having people in the shot also serves its purposes if that's what you want, but it's definitely something you need to take into consideration.
And last but not least: I'm really curious what this structure looks like at dusk or dawn, with more colour in the light. Might be worth a try
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