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ArtisticThere is a spiderweb in my saliva.Artistic
I have cloves instead of teeth, nutmeg for the tongue, peach pits for lips. I am a plate of fruit in your still life portrait.
I'm not the focus, no, not at all, look,
I'm here for background, for the dust, for a supporting role and a sage phrase, uttered right before curtain closing, whispered
right before the final brushstroke.
I am the white noise before the needle hits the music on the record. I am painted appetizer apple - the cinnamon slices
swept from the room when dinner is served.


suffocatingI imagined bleaching chicken bones and collecting them in the see-through kitchen cabinets instead of the multi-colored macaroni.suffocating
I imagined that god would talk to me when I drink chai under my desk. Instead I had a cat that mewled at me to feed her.
I imagined time stopping at the door, turning back and smiling. He'd say: "I don't know what I was thinking. I'm here for you and I won't go away. I promise." And I'd forgive after I punished him with underboiled eggs and over-toasted bread.
I imagined breathing again without the whir in my lungs wi
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Your critiques and your writing are both wonderful to read. They make me feel small in an oddly comfortable way. I'm still trying to figure out how to translate that into comments, because I can be slow that way.
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I want a spirit like the wind.
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Drop me a line!
Talk to me about anything. The alarm clock that sits at an angle on your bedside to your need for someone to pick you up when you fall.
I will pick you up.
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φιλοπαίσμονες καί οἱ θεοί
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φιλοπαίσμονες καί οἱ θεοί
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