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A dream is a grassland.  
 
Its perimeters wide and its limits far.  
Yet, it's rarely ever crossed;  
most just gaze into its horizon and hope.  
 
Yes ...  
they stand there and hope,  
waiting for something, anything to push them along.  
To help them begin their journey into that endless expanse.  
They wait and they wait as their lives pass them by with each setting of the sun.  
 
"Don't follow that path little ones  
it's never too late.  
Take those steps into the unknown  
knowing that you may fail,  
knowing full well that you might never live to see the
Crossing the Grassland
by *NathanWhitaker

Hi Charles, Thanks for entering this piece into the workshop. Let me see if I can leave a some constructive criticism and a couple tho...

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        In that moment, Raanmir was the nail he forced into the wood, methodically driven downward.  The other nails felt just as dejected every time the hammer slammed onto their surface.  Yet, they knew the blacksmith that created them was not better or worse than the carpenter shaping the wood.  Without all the nails, each barn, home, harbor, and pier would not stand.  Without the nails' unbending presence, the face of elfin civilization changed.  Raanmir was the nail he forced into the wood, pointed and sharp.  He bided his time and, waitin
Workshop: He was the Nail
by =Amriah

Hi Amriah, Thanks for entering this piece into the workshop. Let me see if I can leave a bit of constructive criticism and a couple th...

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    Monday morning, my laptop charger made an odd sputtering sound, and quietly died. What this means is that my time online will be slivered down some. I've ordered a new adapter, but optimistic estimates put the delivery date on this Friday. Here's hoping I don't end up spending the weekend without computer access!

    If I'm conspicuously silent or absent, blame technology.

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    `GaioumonBatou 8 hours 15 minutes ago
    Are you really, truly terrifying? :paranoid:

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    I just wanted to tell you that you are awesome.

    Your critiques and your writing are both wonderful to read. They make me feel small in an oddly comfortable way. I'm still trying to figure out how to translate that into comments, because I can be slow that way.

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    Congratulations for winning the critique contest, even if that congrats is over 15 days late! :highfive::XD:

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